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Aerobatics Unlimited

by Radiantm3 • Uploaded: Dec. 25 '06
Gallerized Dec. '06 aerobatics.gif
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Description: Flight training and aerobatics instruction school.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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OcularInk said on Dec. 28 '06

To me, the 'A' isn't working very well with the rest of the type treatment. One other thing to mention, the plane is flying in a downwards direction. This gives it somewhat of a negative feel about it. Even so, I like your concept with this one. Nice job!! Kevin
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sisudesigns said on Dec. 28 '06

I like it..., fill the "--e" horizontal line in a bit more, so its readable. And the Unlimited part, is very undescribing. I wouldn't know it was a instruction school... by looking at this.. without reading the description...

PsalmLove said on Dec. 28 '06

Hello LogoPondians (Ponders? Pundits?), first time posting here. I agree with Ocular about the downwards plane being a bit negative. Perhaps you can try a large smallcase script-ish 'a' so the plane loops up at the end? I do like what you did with the crossbar of the 'A' and the 'e' though, you might have to lose it when you switch to lowercase. oh and on a blue background, when reduced (and even in fullsize to an extent) the 'unlimited' part is hard to read since it's gray. but that's just what could be improved. the rest is perfect :)

bazizi said on Jan. 04 '07

the logo seems really dated. it's not fresh

radiantm3 said on Jan. 06 '07

bazizi. You are right. I did this over 6 years ago. :)

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