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- Aquaris
- by Spavvic
- Everything for aquarian.
- Number of views: 3125
- Date Submitted: Mar. 21 '09
- Added to Gallery: Dec. 04 '09
Mar. 21 '09
ryantoyota said:Nice. I'm surprised at how legible the A is here. I think it's because Aqua is such a recognizable letter combo. One thing I think might improve it is makind the bubbles look a little more hand-drawn with more varied stroke weights to reflect the same style as the rest of the mark. Nice job though.
Dec. 04 '09
alto said:Very nice! I agree with Ryan about the altering the bubbles to look hand drawn, but I disagree about the background. Nice job!
Dec. 04 '09
dannygdammit said:I think if you cloned those white lines out of your bg you'd be golden.. I like the sunlight in the water though.. kudos
Dec. 05 '09
OcularInk said:Somehow I read this at first glance which really surprises me...in a good way.
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Mar. 21 '09
identifly said:niiiiiice