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nocturn v2
by tass
personal logo v2 update with a little origami approach on the bat. what do you think about it?
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Date Submitted: Mar. 20 '09
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Aug. 12 '09

muse7 said:

Nocturn, Because you lost the bat. The font is nice and the mark is sweet. IMO you are working to hard to make this one entity. The fix: simplify - center bat above nocturn and you keep the essence of the mark everyone loves and the readability of nocturn. That was easy - challenge me. :P

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Aug. 12 '09

tass said:

Well i was thinking about that at my first sketches, but i didn't like the result from what i remember, maybe i'll give it a second try, thanks for your advice Ashley!

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