@Neonimage
I tried to make the fold apparent by using gradients and shadows, but I will try subtle lines. Thanks.
@deyoungz
As far as I understand it doesn't need to work in B&W because it is for a CSS Design blog. I made the assumption that it will only be screen displayed.
Hey Dude. leave off the stokes it will ruin it. If anything needs to change its probaly the typeface a slightly heavier weight. The paper plane is excellent, if it is need for print you could copy the plane and fill it with 20% black and place it underneath it slightly off centred and it would do the job.
@mcdseven
I was going to only place hairlines on the wingfolds, but it didn't make it better so I'm leaving it as is.
I think the light typeface fits the name quite well, Industry could be a little heavier I guess but I want the idea of featherweight to come across clearly.
What about trying the plane next to the type instead of below it.
Right now there seems to be a disconnect between the two pieces. In the graphic you get that they go together because they are shown together, but there isn't anything that actually ties the type to the plane.
Oh and do leave off the lines it looks much nicer this way.
Great job
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Neonimage said on Dec. 12 '06
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