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I am actively looking for critiques
- Light Industry
- by Bernard Kowalski
- v4
- Number of views: 1182
- Dated Submitted: Dec. 12 '06
Dec. 13 '06
mcdseven said:Hey Dude. leave off the stokes it will ruin it. If anything needs to change its probaly the typeface a slightly heavier weight. The paper plane is excellent, if it is need for print you could copy the plane and fill it with 20% black and place it underneath it slightly off centred and it would do the job.
Dec. 14 '06
jonni said:Nice logo Bernard, I hope the work you put in it was worth the tiny little iPod shuffle ;)
Dec. 20 '06
mdavis682 said:What about trying the plane next to the type instead of below it.
Right now there seems to be a disconnect between the two pieces. In the graphic you get that they go together because they are shown together, but there isn't anything that actually ties the type to the plane.
Oh and do leave off the lines it looks much nicer this way.
Great job
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Dec. 12 '06
Neonimage said:Really love the colours. Would look good if you had a really thin black outline over the folds or the paper plane