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Real or Fake client not set Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Sleepy Eyes Filmworks
- by michal
- Number of views: 4258
- Date Submitted: Mar. 03 '09
- Added to Gallery: Apr. 27 '09
Mar. 08 '09
Paul Rand said:Try a different font.
The sleepy eye concept can be pulled off without flipping them.
filmworks doesn't sit right, like an afterthought.
Mar. 08 '09
logomotive said:^ I think that Paul "Loyd" Rand is talking in his sleep.
Maybe you should at least post some work before telling people what to do.
Mar. 09 '09
theartistt said:I agree. although I don't agree with everything he says, he does seem to know his stuff. has anyone seen Toni lately?
Mar. 10 '09
dbunk said:Micha! Gotcha....?!? with those sleepyeyes :)
Apr. 27 '09
tconrad said:Nice eye-dea (sorry bad pun). I don't mind the font at all I think it fits, the placement of the filmworks doesn't bother me either. The 'Fi L' ascenders nestle nicely into the negative space of 'ye' and the 'k' fits well at the end of 'eyes'.
I do think the eyes seem a bit more 'indifferent' than sleepy. I do see how the 'e' right side up might make for nice bags under the eyes. Either way, I like what you've got. Kudos!
Apr. 27 '09
logotomy said:Nice, Actually, I agree with tconrad about the nice bags under the eyes when the e are flipped back to normal.
Apr. 27 '09
teeps said:Great, I like this as you've presented.... you've rotated the "e" upside down... which is giving a sleepy feel
Apr. 28 '09
Mitch said:I agree that the eyes don't need to be rotated, just reflected. This could then be used to play on the bags under the eyes.
And yes the strap is awkwardly set at the moment, but don't feel centering it would help the situation.
Apr. 28 '09
theartistt said:The more I look at this, the more I don't think it should change. It grows on you in a good way.
Apr. 28 '09
ClimaxDesigns said:i think we need to slow down here as this logo is not green flagged so the criticism isn't really warranted and the e's are presented as the designer wanted them to so the second guess that makes not sense they look fine the way they are.
also the name of the logo is sleepy eyes not morning eyes which bags under the eyes would more be a reference to. one is at night the other is in the morning, one is a kin to going to sleep the other is waking up.
Apr. 28 '09
nilly said:excellent logo, I love the font
Apr. 28 '09
michal said:Climax, it's always good to hear some criticism :)
In most cases designer has to make decissions about design by himself.
I think that there is always some way to create something better and all you can do is to learn on your mistakes.
Apr. 28 '09
rambal said:except the font, the mark stands out only because of the concept.
Nice concept.
Apr. 30 '09
tconrad said:I'm curious where it says baggy eyes is specifically a morning thing? I always thought there to be more general association to sleepiness or lack of sleep. I'm no MD though.
Apr. 30 '09
tconrad said:ps. since when did not having a green flag stop people from critiquing/commenting?
can't he just not scroll down the page?
Apr. 30 '09
gold coast website design said:Not bad. On it's own it's good but compared to the level of creativity on this site it's a bit lame.
May. 02 '09
sleepyeyes said:nice font choice and look but the eyes just don't look sleepy enough for my liking. May it's the straight across of the "eyelids" that says annoyed or angry to me more than sleepy. Mentally i associate more of a downward curve with sleepy
on a similar note it's kinda sad to see someone else making use of my name, oh well, such is life
May. 04 '09
snowkai said:love it!
May. 04 '09
19930921 said:Hello michal
I have featured your logo on my websites feature called 'Hot or Not'
Each month i give my opinions on the Featured logo's on Logopond.
http://www.thegraphicshack.com/?p=275
Thank you.
Adam @ http://www.TheGraphicShack.com
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Mar. 03 '09
matt.h said:Great idea!