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- Silicon Salad
- by StarCommand
- Brain & Salad...
- Number of views: 3796
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 28 '06
- Added to Gallery: Dec. 03 '06
Nov. 28 '06
OMNI said:Though you don't need to differentiate in boldness the two words in the logotype.
Nov. 28 '06
OMNI said:Nice! Though you don't need to differentiate in boldness the two words in the logotype.
Nov. 28 '06
olympe said:Absolutely explicit lyrics!
Nov. 28 '06
OMNI said:Gee, sorry for posting the same comments 3 times... Am new here :)
Dec. 06 '06
heavywinter said:Making the line thickness of the @ symbols vary to a greater extent and hiding the symbols toward the back behind the ones nearer to the foreground could create more depth which might be nice. It feels flat right now (which isn't necessarily a bad thing) with the green outline and the at symbol lines all more or less the same weight. Adding in some perspective and depth might really make it shine.
Dec. 07 '06
StarCommand said:Thank you Heavywinter for your point of vue. My aim, in fact was a "flat" picto, with a perspective feeling, with all the objects on the same layer. In fact, the challenge was as well to equilibrate lines and background. But your approach should be interesting too. Thanks for your reaction again.
Aug. 03 '08
garavi said:the mark is great. at first i saw the brain.
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Nov. 28 '06
OMNI said:Nice!