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Picnic

by BobiFox • Uploaded: Jan. 28 '09
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Description: bbq briquettes

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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THEArtistT said on Jan. 28 '09

I don't know. The concept is good, but the execution needs work. The smoke coming off the briquettes looks too much like a skier. Can you do something a bit simpler? The briquettes themselves are a little close together. Round the corners more. I also think you should make the middle ones half red and have black.
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bobifox said on Jan. 28 '09

you have a point, thnx for the suggestion.

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