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Client work I am actively looking for critiques
- Adams apple
- by strizhart
- This club is supposed to be a night club actually. "Interactive" just because of kind of new system of guests registration. They can vote for their favorite star. Work in progress
- Number of views: 7495
- Date Submitted: Jan. 07 '09
- Added to Gallery: Jan. 09 '09
Jan. 08 '09
sdijock said:Very cool. But I almost want to see more solid stars/shapes to help fill in the gaps a little. I think the apple shape is almost too open right now and needs more shapes to help define it more. Fav'd anyway.
Jan. 15 '09
mklickman said:I like your idea, and your execution of smaller shapes to make the apple shape is very unique. Stay away from thin lines, however, as they will get severely diminished (and possibly not even reproduced) if the logo is printed or displayed small. I would also experiment with other typefaces for the main text as well; I didn't really get the feeling that this was for a night club. You are off to a very good start, and have a very good concept. Keep it up!
Jan. 29 '09
tanyildiz said:wonderful job! favorite one! in order to reveal the stars more, the circles can be made 50% transparent. after that, at the same time, it will be more 3D.
Jan. 29 '09
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Jan. 07 '09
THEArtistT said:Love the color treatment. The illustration and everything is very cool, but how does it relate to an interactive club?