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- Sushi
- by Type08
- Restaurant...
- Number of views: 2483
- Date Submitted: Dec. 22 '08
Dec. 22 '08
sdijock said:Very nice. Although, it's a little odd to have the red dot (food?) in the middle of the chopsticks. I think you could get away with moving the red dot down more towards the end of the chopsticks and still have it read as an "H". You might have to shift the chopsticks up a little too. Nice regardless. Fav'd.
Dec. 22 '08
LoGoBoom said:I agree with sdijock...looks nice but the dot so high up the sticks bugs me.
Dec. 23 '08
gyui said:I agree with LoGoBoom and Sdijock. The Japanese flag is not obvious IMO (due to size difference of the red sun on a flag and here), so for me, seeing the chopsticks higher up and the fish egg dot lower would work.
also a sidenote, if you are eating and holding food in the middle of the chopstick, it kind of gives the impression of someone who is a noobie at using chopsticks. Holding food at the end is the way to go :)
Still like the concept Type08 :)
Dec. 23 '08
shirazk said:Wonderful. I agree about the flag not being obvious, but it really doesn't matter. great job.
Jan. 13 '09
OcularInk said:Very clever logo, Alen. It really does read well. Only thing I might have done differently is add more spacing between each of the letters. I think it needs more breathing room. Ya know?
Jan. 13 '09
OcularInk said:Not if you kept the chopstick/H the way it is. You don't have to add space between the chopsticks and red circle. Treat that as a letter. Then add some space between the other letters to match the negative space between the two chopsticks. Make sense? Either way, it looks nice.
Apr. 01 '09
vieuxlache said:nice and simple. Excellent concept mate :) wish i had even a quarter of the inspiration shown on this site :)
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Dec. 22 '08
mavric said:this is nice