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OFFSLIMlab
by offslim
logotype for personal use.
Number of views: 353
Date Submitted: Dec. 20 '08
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Dec. 20 '08

lundeja said:

It's a little hard to read the offslimlab.

Dec. 20 '08

quson said:

Yeah, I also had legibility issues with the thumb. Pulling the words apart would help, but it really needs more contrast between text/background.

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Dec. 21 '08

Kode said:

The name is a mouthful :-)
I like the mark!

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Dec. 21 '08

Houston-we said:

na sveikas :) tas '4' tikrai nesiziuri, normali anglu kalba kaip 'for' butu tikrai geriau. taip pat kaip minejo, kai tekste keli zodziai, butu geriau juos skirti kitom spalvom, o taip pat ir tos geltonos (teksto ir backgroundo) labai jau susilieja. Zenklas patiko, geras origami.

Dec. 21 '08

offslim said:

@ lundeja, guson & Kode thank for your comments :] I will remade this logotype and uploud it later.

@ Houston-we: Sveikas, sveikas :] del to "4" tai per ilgai tas zodelis "for" buvo, tad nusprendziau sutrumpint '] Origami pirma pats sulanksciau ant popieriaus lapo, o poto tik nupiesiau su ps senuku :] Aciu.

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