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- Air Power Turbines
- by mavrin
- The company serving the aviation turbine
- Number of views: 11243
- Date Submitted: Nov. 10 '08
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 11 '08
Nov. 10 '08
penflare said:really unique mark, great job -- feel tho if you make the mark smaller and put the text to the right, it would be stronger
Nov. 10 '08
mavrin said:The horizontal arrangement provides for:)
Nov. 11 '08
L-train3320 said:I agree with gthobbs. This logo is BA (bad edited word). As for the text, I like simple sans serif fonts but I would like to see some other options. Im not sure if changing the location of the will hurt or improve it either way. I think that's my only criticism, other than that I really like it.
Nov. 12 '08
lucidity said:Awesome.
Dec. 01 '08
DAdesign said:Love the blues, the mark is great, certainly speaks of the form and function of the turbines. Nice font choice. I'm not sure if the placement is entirely working for me though. It's visually a little off balance - heavy on the right. Perhaps make the mark a little smaller and behind the type, near the end. I'm thinking if the "s" in turbines ended near the center of inner circle it may (or may not) flow better. You may have already tried this.
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Nov. 10 '08
formrausch said:yes, i like :)