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Metro Turf: by bartodell; Lawn and landcare company logo in a major metropolitan area.; Number of views: 3360; Dated Submitted: Oct. 25 '06; Added to Gallery: Jan. 14 '08

Oct. 25 '06

I like this alot. The \"t\" really stands out alot more than the \"m\". Maybe try joining the ends of the \"t\" to the two side parts of the \"m\" so it\'s all one piece - still keeping the \"t\" a different shade...?

Oct. 31 '06

CreativeGuy said:

I like it. In my opinion, it\'s \"lacking\" in some area, but I can\'t quite put my finger on it. I like the M and T being separate in the mark, maybe it\'s the font choice? I dunno.

Nov. 01 '06

OcularInk said:

I think you have a nice logo going on here. However, I\'m wondering how the mark would look without the black box around it and \'Metro Turf\' changed to all black.

-Kevin

Nov. 12 '07

elementdw said:

looks like it says "iti"

Nov. 12 '07

admarcbart said:

Funny others are not seeing it that way. ;)

Jan. 15 '08

drewboy said:

Sorry Bart, but I saw ITI as well. There's something strangely sexual about the mark as well... although maybe that's just me??

Jan. 15 '08

artboy said:

Gotta admit I agree, I saw ITI first - only looking at the first comment made me look at the name and realise it should be an 'M'. I also think 'Metroturf' is a bit too close to the mark.

Jan. 15 '08

onesummer said:

yeah, I read ITI first, too, sorry. and I don't care for the extras (like the highlight on the T in the mark). I think this would look so much better if you loose the gradients, and leave it in a one or two flat color version.

Jan. 15 '08

Lawrence Anderson said:

I would like to see "metro turf" set in Gotham.

Jan. 15 '08

hoshi6 said:

Oh man, I love it...the only things...and this is constructive criticism, as was previously mentioned, It's a bit harder to see an "M"...i see the "T" right away though. Also I think it would look great if instead of just a black rectangle around the icon itself, maybe it would look good with the black rectangle around all of it, that way the name itself stands out too.