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Ovation Coffee
by gfxmonkey
Logo design for a coffee related Website (in the works). edit: This is the revised version which improves on the original logo.
Number of views: 2717
Date Submitted: Oct. 22 '06

Oct. 22 '06

unstructure said:

The illustration is nice, but the coffee bean looks a bit like a hotdog bun to me. Maybe darken the browns a bit and shrink the blue stroke around it.

The bottom line of text is rather hard to read at that size, maybe switching to a sans serif typeface in a bolder face will make it more legible.

Finally I would give \"ovation\" more space at the bottom, it doesn\'t seem right resting at the bottom like that.

Oct. 22 '06

gfxmonkey said:

Unstructure, I agree with you. I will be reworking the bean, the top line placement, and the font for the tagline. Thanks for your comments.

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