LogoPond - Identity Inspiration -

Real or Fake client not set I am actively looking for critiques

More: by actiondesigner; More v2; Number of views: 7568; Date Submitted: Oct. 20 '08; Added to Gallery: Oct. 21 '08

Comments
Swimmers

Oct. 20 '08

logoholik said:

Love it!

Oct. 20 '08

actiondesigner said:

Much appreciated:)

Oct. 20 '08

janzabransky said:

This is better

Oct. 20 '08

epsilon said:

1 - this one is way better. Not sure about the hatch fill though.

Oct. 20 '08

actiondesigner said:

Thanks a lot for you feedback:)

Oct. 20 '08

nido said:

clever!...

Oct. 20 '08

actiondesigner said:

Thanks nido:)

Oct. 20 '08

onward design said:

Coincidence?

http://www.eulda.com/images/win07/Finland_150.jpg

Oct. 20 '08

actiondesigner said:

now why would I go and do a thing like that? That woul be foolish with the exposure of Eulda. I even won a Wolda myself ...but I havent seen that logo, and I dont know if Moor in finish does mean More. Anyone? My intention with the logo and the previous was to vary the space of the o, fitting it with different sentences related to consumation. I guess I have to reconsider this though. Just need to find out what moor actually means first

Oct. 20 '08

logomotive said:

^ I concur, and yours is better IMO.

Oct. 20 '08

sandhya said:

this one is "more" in sync concept wise.

Oct. 20 '08

chng! said:

i like this one much much more

Oct. 21 '08

actiondesigner said:

Appreciate all the feedback:) thanks

Oct. 21 '08

Mouvedia said:

Oct. 21 '08

morelucas said:

This is great, it looks just like a logo I was thinking about for my own name. Nice job :) cheers!

Oct. 21 '08

ddd said:

I agree with onward design. Now I would not have been so accusatory with it. But the beauty of this open and broad format here. Is you get a good sampling of various sets of eyes and experiences. I post here mainly to see if my concept has been done before and to get crits.

For me, I instantly recognized the logo from another source. So I would not use it (and this has happened to me here as well). Although yours is a nice implementation. It is just too close to the other concept IMO. Again not saying it was a direct rip....great minds tend to think alike

Oct. 21 '08

KGB said:

the fill on the letterforms is distracting and doesn't add anything to the design.

Oct. 21 '08

actiondesigner said:

@KGB. Thanks for your valuable input.

@ ddd. First off. I really havent seen that logo before. And for your FYI. That logo you reffer doesnt have anything do do with More. It doesnt mean anything. The concept is based on space and adaptable furniture in space (I think) In that sence I have a TOTALY different concept. I play on the pronunciation ...the O will vary depending on how much mooooooooooooooooore you aim for. So great minds think alike, but not in this case. But I think its nice to have a discussion around this topic.

@morelucas. Great minds think alike;)
@mouvedia. Glad I made you smile:)

Oct. 21 '08

Farmill said:

http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/39325 is a similar concept, personally I prefer that one.

Oct. 21 '08

ddd said:

Hey AD

I have no doubt you haven't seen the design. It happens to us all. But like I said my opinion is I would dump it. It's just too close. But do what you do. I still like your implementation tho.

Farmill - I like that a lot as well.

Oct. 21 '08

datasky said:

nothing else!

Oct. 21 '08

cake_sama said:

lol Tonfue, some good points there
Good work man

Oct. 21 '08

tconrad said:

either drop the lines or lighten its stroke. they detract a bit as they are now like KGB said.

Oct. 21 '08

t3amBrian said:

The diagonal lines are trendy. That look is part of a fad that is finally dying off. It would look better in a solid color.

Oct. 21 '08

jonjon2 said:

That's clever! I also like the stripes.
Well done!

Oct. 22 '08

rambal said:

cool typo play..

Oct. 22 '08

Matheus said:

this is very cleaver

Oct. 24 '08

tkhoury said:

i love it, ...

Dec. 06 '08

THEArtistT said:

The stripes don't take anything away in my opinion. And I agree with Action Designer that this is a simple case of great minds thinking alike, but in two completely different ways and industries. There really isn't much conflict here. Certainly I have pulled some logos I've posted when pointed out they look very similar to another, but I've kept some as well for the same reasons I say here. No, in this case I'm with Action Designer. Sorry DDD. Floated.

Dec. 17 '08

kriando said:

very good!!!

Dec. 23 '08

cake_sama said:

http://99designs.com/contests/14691

Seems like everyone likes your work

Dec. 23 '08

smartinup said:

under javam@n's portfolio there seems to be more work that has been strongly influenced by some other designers here. people may wanna look into it

Jan. 15 '09

lox said:

I'm chasing up a query about an alleged copy of this logo on 99designs. I would really like to hear about it if you guys have some other examples that are potentially infringing. We certainly don't tolerate copying on 99designs, but I am always very careful to hear all sides of the story first and do some background research. It's always possible for the same idea to evolve independantly in multiple places, assuming people are guilty might be convenient, but it sucks when you are on the receiving end. Help me do the right thing here and let me know if you have any further details that might help.

Lachlan Donald, 99designs.com (lachlan@99designs.com)

Jan. 15 '09

Relevant said:

Do you ban the people who are constantly caught ripping? If they have more than one infraction, then its obviously intentional. You could save yourself a lot of trouble by removing them from further competitions.

Jan. 18 '09

lox said:

For blatant rip-offs we ban, and for minor infractions we give a fairly lengthy suspension.