Mangia Mangia - Pasta Bar by Raja

Mangia Mangia - Pasta Bar

by Raja • Uploaded: Oct. 14 '08

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Description: ID in process for new age eco friendly pasta bar / restaraunt

As seen on: www.rajasandhu.com

Status: Nothing set

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raja said on Oct. 14 '08

I got inspired after seeing this on my desk

!image link!:http://rajasandhu.com/images/noodle.jpg

raja said on Oct. 14 '08

http://rajasandhu.com/images/noodle.jpg

sdijock said on Oct. 14 '08

I think the shape of your noodle needs to look more like the one that raja's holding up in the photo. Your shape is close, but the open end on the left side of the noodle just doesn't look right - I don't think it's necessary to show it. Just draw the noodle with the open end hidden (ie, facing down).

I would also take another look at the way in which you're handling the descender of the "g". It looks like an afterthought.

logomotive said on Oct. 14 '08

I agree, GREAT concept you have going, just needs to be refined.

GabrielRO said on Oct. 14 '08

GREAT colors, GREAT concept, GREAT type... but needs some love.

firebrand said on Oct. 14 '08

You must have had fun drawing this. Reminds me of a water flume at a theme park.

raja said on Oct. 14 '08

oodles!

OcularInk said on Oct. 14 '08

Awesome concept, man!!

tass said on Mar. 12 '09

i really like the shape, the light and the colors!

nido said on Mar. 24 '09

Raja rules!...

raja said on Apr. 01 '09

rules? what rules? haha

dbunk said on Apr. 02 '09

"eco friendly" pasta bar / restaurant. To me it looks more like an icon than a logo, its a fine line though. When its Raja there is high expectation, this one doesnt meet up.

nido said on Apr. 02 '09

Raja sucks!...

raja said on Sep. 01 '11

sorry to disappoint dbunk!

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