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Vonde
by JasonCho
bird. a basic cover :)
Number of views: 5105
Date Submitted: Oct. 02 '08
Added to Gallery: Oct. 03 '08
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Oct. 03 '08

echofactory said:

Everybody loves swans.

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Oct. 04 '08

penflare said:

yeah i love the shape, great job jason cho!

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Oct. 05 '08

logomotive said:

This is a bit weak IMO.Type is too small,not enough grace in bird,overall lacking a lot.

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Oct. 05 '08

logomotive said:

What I always try to do is imagine all of the type lumped into a solid mass and compare that to the the mark. I also take into consideration the negative areas of the type and your swan here is solid. It's all about ratio. if you where to reduce this logo for biz card size the type would nearly be gone.

Oct. 06 '08

GabrielRO said:

not like much the "face", love the type

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Oct. 06 '08

maximalist said:

so nice, so beautiful!

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Oct. 07 '08

ddayco said:

I wouldn't add anything. I think it's the simplicity that makes it work. Any more detail would detract from the elegance of it. Nice job.

Oct. 09 '08

waynepashley said:

Like logomotive said, the proportions of the bird make it look dumpy and top-heavy. I also don't see the point in the line on the face/beak which wouldn't be visible when printed small.

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Oct. 09 '08

jasoncho said:

okay , oh and the little line on the face... I don't know where it came from :(

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Oct. 15 '08

kokolynee said:

This makes me feel lofty inside- gorgeous.

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