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I am actively looking for critiques
- Cozac One
- by modeus
- This is a logo proposal for a retailer of a corporate clothes (businessmen orientated).
- Number of views: 762
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 16 '06
Feb. 11 '07
kult house said:Several thoughts. This could work, though somehow I feel the design doesn't lend itself well to colors..I think a totally grayscale version would serve it better.
I don't misread this, I simply read it as "Coza Cone", not "Cozac Cone".
If you lost the weird alternating reds, tightened the character tracking up a bit, and differentiated the two words slightly, you'd have a more corporate-fitting logo.
Feb. 11 '07
sisudesigns said:I dont like it, way too busy.. no reason to have the A chopped in half and you have 4 type faces... and technically 4 different colors with 2 weights... and its kinda sterile.
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Oct. 20 '06
hobbbz said:the letters keep getting jumbled in my head when i try to read it. I got Coca Zone, Coza Cone, all kinds of crazy stuff. I suggest tweaking the spacing between the words.