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False Truth
by chungdha
False overshadowing or casting shadow over the truth.
Number of views: 137
Dated Submitted: Sep. 15 '08

Sep. 17 '08

incubusknight said:

It starts fine... but after the 'tr' from truth I feel its kind of forced. You are forcing the truth... lol. Nice concept though.


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