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Brosch and Co.
by Lephew Design
Design for a company that houses other businesses at their location.
Number of views: 133
Dated Submitted: Sep. 12 '08

Sep. 16 '08

kweeky said:

Lovin' the vintage style. Only thing that doesn't sit right with me (and this is more personal preference) is the size of the illustration - I think it could go a bit larger.

Sep. 16 '08

OcularInk said:

I agree with kweeky regarding the sizing proportions. The text can be shrunk down by about 25-35% allowing the mark to be larger. Especially considering the size of the lamps on the lampposts. Those could get lost at smaller sizes. I also don't think you need the cloud background, but that's just me. :-)

Sep. 16 '08

sdijock said:

I think you could tighten the kering in "BROSCH" a little and open up "Co" slightly. And personally, I would bring the bottom loop of the "B" down a little more and shift the "AND" and "Co" over to the left more (almost centered underneath the building).

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