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Brosch and Co.

by Lephew Design • Uploaded: Sep. 12 '08
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Description: Design for a company that houses other businesses at their location.

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Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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kweeky said on Sep. 16 '08

Lovin' the vintage style. Only thing that doesn't sit right with me (and this is more personal preference) is the size of the illustration - I think it could go a bit larger.
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OcularInk said on Sep. 16 '08

I agree with kweeky regarding the sizing proportions. The text can be shrunk down by about 25-35% allowing the mark to be larger. Especially considering the size of the lamps on the lampposts. Those could get lost at smaller sizes. I also don't think you need the cloud background, but that's just me. :-)
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sdijock said on Sep. 16 '08

I think you could tighten the kering in "BROSCH" a little and open up "Co" slightly. And personally, I would bring the bottom loop of the "B" down a little more and shift the "AND" and "Co" over to the left more (almost centered underneath the building).

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