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I am actively looking for critiques
- Creative dog
- by ranganath
- In our place we play "HOLI" its a color festival, and i saw some kids putting color on a dog... the dog was colorful and in my mind i got this...
- Number of views: 3154
- Dated Submitted: Sep. 12 '08
- Added to Gallery: Sep. 12 '08
Sep. 12 '08
logomotive said:really interesting dog, i feel the tail should have more acute angles though and perhaps have a little better color harmony,the brown and black need to be muted a little more IMO, but it's very cool,good job.
Sep. 12 '08
tconrad said:I agree with the duck. Maybe also make the two legs separate colors as well, none of the other colors are used twice. The typeface 'Origami' may also be a nice choice, it's still serifed like you have, but a bit more angular and may work well with the shapes you have in the dog. I really like the look of this by the way!
Sep. 14 '08
Tømme said:very nice. love your general 'dog'-shape especially the curly tail :) nice work!
Sep. 17 '08
hindmarshdesign said:the curly tail is weird but i love the rest of the dog! its very very nice!
Oct. 15 '08
kokolynee said:Nice Dog, really great! Not sure about position and font choice though. Something seems off. Love it though, really caught my eye
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Sep. 12 '08
Mishka said:excellent!