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Alidocious

by OcularInk • Uploaded: Sep. 10 '08
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Description: As in Super Cali Fragi Listic Expi Alidocious. :-) Available on IncSpring with domain name.

As seen on: IncSpring

Status: For sale

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: identitysymbolmarktrademarkiconic

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NeilMcDonald said on Sep. 10 '08

Caught my eye right away, nice one.

OcularInk said on Sep. 12 '08

Thanks guys. I still feel like this has a ways to go though. Any constructive feedback on how to improve the design is greatly appreciated. Cheers!

Type08 said on Sep. 12 '08

Hello OC, let me throw some ideas then...
1) I think there are 2 many stars?
2) umbrella could be like 20% downsized?
3) what if you make the holder of umbrella (stick) of the letter L from the word and leave some space between the holder and the cover?
Whutcha think?

OcularInk said on Sep. 12 '08

Alen, thanks man!! That's exactly what I was looking for. Let me try those changes out. Anyone else wanting to break this one down, feel free to chime in as well. Thanks again!

OcularInk said on Sep. 14 '08

: Update :

smartinup said on Sep. 14 '08

OC, this is nice.... bla bla bla, every time i look at it, i see the mortan salt girl logo. i know this looks no where near it. but. everytime i look at it, thats what i see. nanny lady never had anything coming down from the umbrella, just a big skirt. ant way to make a skirt and unbrella at the same time?

peterehat said on Sep. 16 '08

AWESOME! The magic dust brings it all together. Nice.

Hayes Image said on Sep. 17 '08

Love it!! It has a very retro feeling about it too...very 50's packaging...nice :)

Thomas said on Sep. 19 '08

Excellent work Oc'. Nice and clean.

OcularInk said on Sep. 19 '08

Interesting thoughts and ideas. Thanks everyone. :-D

esotericsean said on Nov. 16 '08

Nice!

At first glance, I thought the umbrella was tied into the word. Maybe a slightly larger 'a'?

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