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Commercial Arts
by ranganath
yet to get approval from the Client
Number of views: 172
Dated Submitted: Sep. 03 '08

Sep. 03 '08

sdijock said:

What is the mark supposed to be and how does it relate to commercial art?

Sep. 03 '08

ranganath said:

Its a combination of two letters "C" and "A" that's it...

Sep. 04 '08

sdijock said:

Ahhh..., now I see it, but I think other people will have the same legibility issues that I did. Because you've filled in the negative space within the letters and have joined them without any line breaks people are going to focus on the interior colors and not on the black outlines of the letter-forms. My suggestion is to add a small triangular notch where the top of the "c" meets the top of the "a" to give the letter-forms a visual separation.

I think you need to bump up your "Commercial Arts" type a bit too for better balance with your mark.

Sep. 05 '08

ranganath said:

Thank u very much for ur comments SDIJock... well as u said i'll working on that... thank u very much...

Sep. 05 '08

ranganath said:

well i will tweak around the shape little bit...

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