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I am actively looking for critiques
- Blow Hole Bar & Grille
- by GasLight Art Co.
- Small Bar on Gulf of Mexico
- Number of views: 2262
- Dated Submitted: Aug. 28 '08
- Added to Gallery: Aug. 30 '08
Aug. 31 '08
NeilMcDonald said:Really sweet man, type is lovely. Would be cool to see the fish a wee bit more puffed up, like more stuck in the 'O', so you don't have the white space within the top and bottom. I like a lot. :)
Sep. 02 '08
guyzelz said:Great job, I think this works just as it is style wise. Your rendering on the fish is great and I love the type. My only sticking point is the size of the "Bar & Grill" type in comparison with everything else.
Sep. 02 '08
macman said:awesome. is that a font or hand drawn type? bar and grill is WAY too small. I would try it lower instead of between the h and L bottoms, and make it bigger and kern it to be wider, but make it bigger before kerning. fish detail is nice, but it will never scale down, it will look like a small spot when at small sizes.
Nov. 05 '08
elmickeylozano said:Who cares if it does not scale down right? Nicelly done. This is a PUB for crying out loud! Show the piece as larger as you can mate!
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Aug. 29 '08
tconrad said:i think i might like it even better with out the fish, nice work.