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"Gruenau Move"
by FUTY
Still in progress.. Ment to be the logo for a programm, which provides sport and social activities in a suburban neighbourhood near Leipzig/Germany...
Number of views: 764
Date Submitted: Aug. 27 '08

Aug. 27 '08

gthobbs said:

Ummmmm... is it just me or is what they are doing illegal in most states. Oh wait, it's Germany. Never mind.


Aug. 27 '08

smartinup said:

grünau move eh..... we call it something else here in the states.

dont understand the purpose of the m and e being scewed.


Aug. 27 '08

FUTY said:

Understood... heven`t thought about it... : )


Aug. 27 '08

FUTY said:

Just by the way... the neighbourhood is called Gruenau.. I probably should switch colours..


Aug. 27 '08

duluthmuffler said:

Futy, this one is the best so far, it's balanced, communicates "M". But mostly, and unfortunately, it is the least offensive. Is there another way you can communicate the action, and relationship. Maybe by adding the right guy's back leg. you may clarify anatomy, and not muck up your simplicity. Maybe it makes it more "G" at the same time.


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