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collegefire.com

by joeydesign • Uploaded: Oct. 06 '06
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Description: Logo for a new college community being built.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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joeydesign said on Oct. 06 '06

Please leave comments if you got\'em.

joeydesign said on Oct. 06 '06

I love when people will come in and drop your logo as far down as they can, but leave no comment! wth?

Avery-Sinclair said on Oct. 06 '06

this is good. not feelin\' the drop shadow though. If it\'s fire, why give it a shadow, anyway?

Tigerblade said on Oct. 06 '06

I agree about the shadow... nah. If you really want a shadow, make it only at the bottom, as if the fire is illuminating it and casting a shadow. My only other suggestion would be to make the flames a bit more... flamy. I don\'t think that\'s a word. Make them a bit more pointed, a little more like how flames might actually look. Otherwise, I like it.

sevenupcan said on Oct. 12 '06

I agree with the above comments. Are there any alternative fonts you could try this logo with? Also I know exactly how you mean when people will rate your work but not leave any comments.

madrid said on Oct. 18 '06

I like this logo, although I would go a bit further and stroke the text line similar to the graphic. Since the stroke wouldn\'t be visible without the drop shadow, I\'d be curious about a double stroke, with the outside being a very light color grey, but obviously a stroke, rather than a glow.
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logomotive said on Nov. 11 '06

Joey, I really like your mark, but I agree with the rest here. Ditch the effects altogether, work a little on the type and I feel you'll have an awesome logo here.I would even rotate the mark 45 degrees (normal ) just as C and F would read.

COGNITARIUM said on Sep. 23 '08

This logo has real potential. I really like it. Critiques: 1. Eliminate the shadow effect. 2. Curl the top tip of the letter F on the logo more randomly to slightly hint at more of a flame effect.

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