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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- remedy massage
- by mirekulous
- Remedy Massage logo was produced for NYC client. The mark is abstracted letter r and m. r is also the massage therapist and middle arch with the dot is the patient.
- Number of views: 3686
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 05 '06
- Added to Gallery: Oct. 08 '06
Oct. 09 '06
zwoelf said:I would refine the propotions (both for just the mark itself and both for the mark/copy relationship). To be hones, I havent seen the r and m...
Oct. 09 '06
kult house said:Far too similar for me.
http://media.arstechnica.com/journals/apple.media/thumb/150/150/rss-hq.jpg
Oct. 09 '06
mirekulous said:Thanks guys for honesty.
The idea was to make a mark that would stand apart from what you usually see in this category: massage. Client wanted corporate look. And yes, I do see the similarity of this mark w the one that appears on this site, although it was not intensional.
Oct. 09 '06
pritchett.nick said:screw the resemblence. when it comes to wave looking symbols and things of that nature...they ALL look the same. i got yelled at all day by some people for one of my logos having the sounds wave symbols in it and saying it looked too much like XM. it\'s a basic symbol...it\'s gonna resemble a lot of other basic symbols. anyway... well done man. i DO see the R and M.
Oct. 09 '06
Tigerblade said:I like it. I think it could maybe be brought a bit tighter together, but otherwise I like it.
ClimaxDesigns: The \'m\' is the grey arch with the dot below.
Oct. 09 '06
ClimaxDesigns said:ah ok , he threw me when he said abstraction, i was looking at the negative space.
Oct. 10 '06
senthil said:hi this is my simple logo, please suggest the ways to improve my logo so that I would improve the qulity of it.
Oct. 16 '06
greenleaf said:reminds me of this:
http://www.pentagram.com/en/portfolio-marks-6.htm
Feb. 26 '08
vanetten.c25 said:I really like this. I saw the 'r' and 'm' immediately, and shortly after I also saw the therapist and the client (without reading the description!). But it's clearly not very obvious, which I think works for it. It's something the viewer can discover and hopefully get a little wow moment. I also like your decision to keep the type centered under the mark as if it were a whole arc. (as if the 'therapist' has room to switch sides.) Favorited!
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Oct. 09 '06
KGB said:does anyone else see this as somewhat sexual?