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Primo Wines & Spirits Co. - Concept 3: by saawan; The company is made of four individuals and so the wine bottle made of four different colors depicts this.; Number of views: 612; Dated Submitted: Jul. 27 '08

Jul. 27 '08

omixam said:

Hey this is cool but I think the bottle is too broad. I believe that it should be a bit more stylized.

Jul. 27 '08

saawan said:

I narrowed down the width of the bottle. I guess it is okay, now? Thanks for commenting, Maximo.

Jul. 27 '08

gthobbs said:

I really like the execution here saawan. I wonder if the angle of the wine in the glass is too severe since it is not in motion. And the P and O might be a tad loose for the rest of the type. Very nice.

Jul. 29 '08

koodoz said:

hey saawan, what is the font you used for the 'wine & spirits co.'?

Jul. 29 '08

saawan said:

@gthobbs: Thanks for the suggestions, Glen. I changed the angle of the wine and adjusted the kerning.
@koodoz: It is Soho Gothic Pro Thin I removed the dots over i's.

Jul. 29 '08

smartinup said:

something about the bottle is very attractive, nice job. where the green and red meet on the right side seems to be giving off a harsh edge, as if the curve in the bottle is off. i thinks its just because were the lines break, maybe slightly tweaking that area?

Jul. 29 '08

saawan said:

Thank you, smartinup. You've a keen eye, I must say! Previously, the bottle wasn't symmetrical where you pointed out. Now, I made it symmetrical.

Jul. 29 '08

sandhya said:

i dont see a balance between the wine glass which is almost 3d and the bottle that looks flat. the relation between the two don't seem to gel in terms of the style too. its the same with the font contrast as well, one is way too thick and the other way too thin. this one is so- so when compared to your other works.