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- UP
- by Muamer
- Urban public apparel, freestyle fashion: UP! :)
- Number of views: 4507
- Date Submitted: Jul. 21 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jul. 21 '08
Jul. 21 '08
Muamer said:Hmmm, I will try... Thanks Batma... I mean gthobbs ;-)
Jul. 21 '08
garavi said:great, man!
Jul. 21 '08
ddayco said:Looks good, but feels a bit heavy. The rounded corners might help or maybe just some more breathing room between the shapes.
Jul. 21 '08
creativeheart said:Looks cool, and works just the way that it is.
For fun I would try to start my stroke out half the size smaller and let it finish at full size to see if it did anything to make it look more exaggerated towards up.
Jul. 22 '08
Muamer said:Thank you all very much! ;-)
@creativeheart: Hmm, that can be interesting too...
Jul. 22 '08
sanjay patil said:This is very well, perfect example of expressive typography.
Jul. 23 '08
Muamer said:Thanks Tariq, Nima and Sanjay. I appreciate it. :-)
Jul. 25 '08
Muamer said:Big Thanks, Marolo :)
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Sep. 20 '08
demiphonic said:perfect :) it's NOT too heavy. The cool factor here is that you sometime see the twisted arrow alone & other times the letters "U" & "P".
Rounded corners may not work... it will kill the 'edgy' aspect needed for the product brand (urban apparel)
the only thing I'd try out are different colours &/or a distressed look to further bring out that urban / gritty feel. %u2026%u2026..thought distressing it would make the logo harder to draw by the local graffiti artist. That%u2019s not good cause I can easily see the your plain version drawn along side the likes if Nike on a city wall. & that%u2019s VERY GOOD for a brand of this type that needs %u2018street cred%u2019.
Nice work.
Sep. 28 '08
Muamer said:Thank you Demiphonic!
< This is basic BW look - I have colour versions, don't worry... ;o)
Mar. 11 '09
kennymaicon said:Nice... Nice...
Mar. 24 '09
Muamer said:Thanks... Thanks...
Aug. 08 '09
mlessed said:Looks like a new identity that Blk/MRKT did fr 7UP.....
Aug. 11 '09
Muamer said:Nope! Check it out again > > >
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Jul. 21 '08
gthobbs said:I like this too. Wonder how it would feel with radius corners.