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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Poco Pollo
- by saawan
- For a kids wear brand.
- Number of views: 1969
- Dated Submitted: Jul. 10 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jul. 14 '08
Jul. 11 '08
alto said:I agree with mdlogo85, the font is too bold and doesn't compliment the mark. Here is one suggestion/example which may get your creative ideas sparked:
Jul. 11 '08
gthobbs said:grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...don't be one of those that works on another's design without asking.
Jul. 11 '08
Relevant said:^ Exactly! Saawan is a good designer, I'm sure he can spark his own creativity.
Jul. 13 '08
saawan said:@mdlogo85: Thanks for the feedback.
@alto: I really appreciate that you took time to critique and suggest changes. Thank you. The brief says the logo shouldn't carry 'kidswear'.
@gthobbs: Thank you very much for your support, Glen. I really appreciate it.
@Relevant: I take it as a compliment. ;) Thank You for supporting, Jon.
Jul. 13 '08
saawan said:I was swaying between brown and black and your suggestion asserts that they should be black. :) Thank you, David.
Jul. 14 '08
mdlogo85 said:This new version is better than the other... I love this font, good choice... And if you add the foot to the "L"...
Jul. 14 '08
saawan said:Thank you, Dario. I don't think adding feet for the chicken would go well with the sans serif font. For this kinda simple illustration, the solution I chose suits better.
Jul. 14 '08
OcularInk said:Something is bugging me about the legs, but this is a really cute and solid logo. Have you tried using straight L's for the legs? I think that would create a better balance.
Jul. 14 '08
saawan said:@gthobbs: Thanks again, Glen.
@OcularInk: I tried using lowercase L's for its legs but the perspective is getting disturbed. They look like two sticks! As long as the readability doesn't suffer, I guess the disoriented L's serve as better legs in perspective. I'm just posting the logo with straight l's for reference. Thanks for the feedback, Kevin.
@cerise: Thank you, Cerise. :)
Jul. 14 '08
hellouriah said:nice rhythm with the type, the bird is a little to detailed. I prefer the perspective one, looks like the birds on stilts.
Jul. 15 '08
alto said:Relax! Wasn't trying to step on anyone's toes. saawan, your latest versions rock!
Jul. 15 '08
hellouriah said:Climax, i meant the beak, I should have said. I don't think there is a need for the extra color.
Jul. 15 '08
sticks said:love it - great work
Jul. 16 '08
tomollo said: mh, there already is a logo out there for a while: "chicken" and "little" - just in french stand in for kids wear...someone should rethink that branding....
Jul. 16 '08
hellouriah said:tomollo: what.. that looks like it was done in paint.. and bears nothing similar to saawan's logo.
Jul. 16 '08
borinagge said:petit poulet?.....yawn.....
Jul. 16 '08
Jeff Fisher LogoMotives said:Great concept and type treatment - and I like the legs at the angles currently shown in the gallery. When the legs are straight the image becomes too stiff and it loses the "kid-like" quality that would represent a children's clothing line well.
Jul. 16 '08
saawan said:@tomollo: I don't think the one you posted qualifies for a professional logo of a decent brand. But, if you're suggesting 'someone' as the petit poulet people then I agree with you that they should rethink their branding. Thanks for the reference, though.
@hellouriah, relevant & borinagge: Thanks for the support, guys!
@Jeff Fisher LogoMotives: Exactly! That was why I left the l's disoriented. It gives a feeling of wobbling in walking that's seen in infants. Thank you for the assertion.
Jul. 17 '08
OcularInk said:Yup, it looks much better the way you have it. Guess I just needed to see it with straight legs. Thanks for posting that up. :-)
Jul. 18 '08
saawan said:@OcularInk: You're welcome, Kevin.
@nima.jazireh: Glad that you liked it, Nima.
Jul. 25 '08
Type08 said:Great logo! Didn't have to touch a thing on the first one! Works perfectly because you can change color of the bird, maybe later for some wear lines and stuff (like ages, sizes, stores...). Great!
Aug. 22 '08
chanadesign said:I love the fact that the chix legs are the "L"!! I like the font!!
Oct. 02 '08
DAdesign said:sawaan,
I saw this logo, evidently after the changes were made, I was very intrigued about it.
I think this latest version is very strong and really supports the notion of a child product line. Great choice of typeface, the legs really add to the playfulness of the mark. Great job, I love it (certainly better than "petit poulet") :)
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Jul. 11 '08
mdlogo85 said:I love the illustraction... but I think the font is too bold... Because where the logo is in a smaller resolution I can't read very well the sentence... I'll try to change the font...