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Vibrato
by jguay
Vibrato is a musical effect produced from a regular pulsating change of pitch.
Number of views: 179
Dated Submitted: Jul. 10 '08

Jul. 11 '08

TECHNEO said:

cool!

Jul. 11 '08

nido said:

this is a good idea!.. but i feel as though you have too many ripples going on.. that its almost hard to read.. this can be just as, if not more, effective if you had only a few.. show a gradual build up like you would have in sound ripples & staring with spaces between them & maybe accumulating in some closer together towards the end... but keep it minimum.

Jul. 11 '08

jguay said:

I've updated the logo. I guess the logo was still a bit illegible. I didn't want to bunch the rings up too much because I want the logo to be effective at smaller sizes, but I did bunch them up slightly and reduced the ring count. Reducing the ring count actually made the letters break up nicer, especially between the I and B. Thanks for the comment nido!

Jul. 11 '08

fogra said:

It's perfect for me at least, jguay.

Jul. 12 '08

gthobbs said:

even more easily read at thumbnail size. nice technique.

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