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Altus Renewables
by c4creative
Concept 4: A transformation of the A & R into a shape with directional movement to represent continuous forward thinking.
Number of views: 3226
Dated Submitted: Jul. 07 '08
Added to Gallery: Jul. 08 '08
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Jul. 07 '08

bartodell said:

Mark seems large in relation to text, but nice none the less.

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Jul. 08 '08

gthobbs said:

Ditto above. Love the mark but layout is all over. Mark is big. Renewables is small. Great monogram though.

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Jul. 08 '08

90degrees90 said:

Thanks guys! This concept didn't make it to the client, so it wasn't refined too much. The client wanted to focus more on the word Altus rather than renewables, hence the scaling. Thanks for the feedback.

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Jul. 08 '08

mr2creative said:

Nice job but the mark looks like an R, can't see the A in it. Also agree with above.

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Jul. 08 '08

gthobbs said:

Try using both hands Mr. Maybe then you could find your A.

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Jul. 10 '08

davidoff said:

I read Raltus when i see it

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Jul. 11 '08

maximalist said:

nice mark mate!

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Jul. 12 '08

darrel said:

This is very nice. Perhaps consider a lock up with the mark above the type left aligned? That might remedy the 'RALTUS' issue.

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Jul. 14 '08

90degrees90 said:

Thanks for the comments guys :)

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