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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Altus Renewables
- by c4creative
- Concept 4: A transformation of the A & R into a shape with directional movement to represent continuous forward thinking.
- Number of views: 1876
- Dated Submitted: Jul. 07 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jul. 08 '08
Jul. 08 '08
gthobbs said:Ditto above. Love the mark but layout is all over. Mark is big. Renewables is small. Great monogram though.
Jul. 08 '08
90degrees90 said:Thanks guys! This concept didn't make it to the client, so it wasn't refined too much. The client wanted to focus more on the word Altus rather than renewables, hence the scaling. Thanks for the feedback.
Jul. 08 '08
mr2creative said:Nice job but the mark looks like an R, can't see the A in it. Also agree with above.
Jul. 10 '08
davidoff said:I read Raltus when i see it
Jul. 12 '08
darrel said:This is very nice. Perhaps consider a lock up with the mark above the type left aligned? That might remedy the 'RALTUS' issue.
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Jul. 07 '08
bartodell said:Mark seems large in relation to text, but nice none the less.