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I am actively looking for critiques
- Inspira
- by Sandhya
- Concept 2
- Number of views: 423
- Dated Submitted: Jul. 06 '08
Jul. 06 '08
bartodell said:Sandhya I love this mark. I think if you take down the set text a couple point sizes or the mark in the same regard it will provide a better visual balance. Right now it seems as both elements are competing for the focal point.
Jul. 06 '08
sandhya said:unfortunately the clients don't want to go this route :(- cos they think its too out there- the clothes they will be selling are Indian dinner party wears ( mainly for women) and gradually expand to western outfits for men, teens and kids.
Jul. 06 '08
sandhya said:Thanks clashmore!...hopefully, with the feedbacks that I am getting from all you people will make them change their mind :) Let's see, will keep my fingers crossed!
Jul. 06 '08
iversoncreative said:Very nice%u2026
Jul. 07 '08
sandhya said:I think with all your feedbacks - it worked, they decided to go with this one - although they like the other san serif font. Thanks!
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Jul. 11 '08
nettogirl said:OOO! I like this!
Jul. 19 '08
itsgareth said:if the mark says inspira too then this is absolutely fantastic. if not, well...its still good! I like your work
Jul. 22 '08
sandhya said:the mark does say inspira as well :) thanks, itsgareth! the rest of the branding is in full swing for this one!
Aug. 15 '08
michaelcampos said:great job sandhya!
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Jul. 06 '08
fogra said:Hard to read, but nice - it could work with type though.