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ty wood
by AlexWende
Proposal for a photographer specialized in weddingphotography...
Number of views: 2920
Date Submitted: Jul. 03 '08
Added to Gallery: Jul. 03 '08
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Jul. 03 '08

davebrenner said:

I like the repeating loops. Different and clean.

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Jul. 03 '08

ClimaxDesigns said:

i wonder if the ood should have the same height as the yw, still very interesting

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Jul. 03 '08

hellouriah said:

I think the top points at the y and the middle stem of the w need to be addressed, they are a little awkward, also if you cut off the top bit of the d, the full loops of the double o's would stand out more, the two wedding rings.

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Jul. 03 '08

brandsimplicity said:

Hey Alex this is very nice.Maybe a small diamond on one of the rings would look cool.

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Jul. 03 '08

mr2creative said:

Nice outcome. I know how hard the letter t is to work with as it is too easy to look like a Christian cross...

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Jul. 04 '08

TECHNEO said:

love it! But do the circles stand for rings or for lenses?

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Jul. 04 '08

AlexWende said:

Thank u for the helpful feedback, I'll try some of your suggestions. :)

@TECHNEO:
Glad u like it. I'm a fan of your showcase, very cool! :D
I'm focused at the wedding theme just like the photographer, so the circles represent the marriage. But I think there could be some more interpretations on this one.

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