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I am actively looking for critiques
- ty wood
- by AlexWende
- Proposal for a photographer specialized in weddingphotography...
- Number of views: 987
- Dated Submitted: Jul. 03 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jul. 03 '08
Jul. 03 '08
ClimaxDesigns said:i wonder if the ood should have the same height as the yw, still very interesting
Jul. 03 '08
hellouriah said:I think the top points at the y and the middle stem of the w need to be addressed, they are a little awkward, also if you cut off the top bit of the d, the full loops of the double o's would stand out more, the two wedding rings.
Jul. 03 '08
brandsimplicity said:Hey Alex this is very nice.Maybe a small diamond on one of the rings would look cool.
Jul. 03 '08
mr2creative said:Nice outcome. I know how hard the letter t is to work with as it is too easy to look like a Christian cross...
Jul. 04 '08
AlexWende said:Thank u for the helpful feedback, I'll try some of your suggestions. :)
@TECHNEO:
Glad u like it. I'm a fan of your showcase, very cool! :D
I'm focused at the wedding theme just like the photographer, so the circles represent the marriage. But I think there could be some more interpretations on this one.
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Jul. 03 '08
davebrenner said:I like the repeating loops. Different and clean.