• Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
pinhole camera
by entz
Proposal for Ruben Parra Photography. Using r and p to create a pinhole camera, back to basic!
Number of views: 2499
Dated Submitted: Jul. 02 '08
Added to Gallery: Jul. 02 '08

Jul. 02 '08

leoramires said:

adoro esse tipo de forma geométrica

Jul. 02 '08

clashmore said:

I like a lot of your stuff, entz, but not this one. Two things, mainly:

1. Why no crossbars on the As?
2. I see rF, maybe. Not RP.

Jul. 03 '08

entz said:

Thank clash. Well, for the A, i wanted to make it less normal and more contemporary and clean. I think the rF was the reason the client didn't pick it i guess :)

Jul. 03 '08

clashmore said:

I just feel like I've seen the A without the crossbar so many times, that it's starting to become a cliche. And in the case of this logo, it's fighting for attention with the mark.

Jul. 03 '08

entz said:

You are right about the cliche :) i'm sure there're lot of other ways to do the A. Will try those next time.

Jul. 03 '08

Prismatic said:

Me encanta la convinacion de colores y el tratamiento de la tipografia en "Parra"

Jul. 03 '08

mokenke said:

I love the concept of the pinhole, it is timeless as a photographic technology cause it was the origin. I like the fact that the P leaves a bit to the imagination, after all, the name says it already. I could live without the A crossbars and I think the color is good.

Jul. 03 '08

shorty said:

beautyfull logo, very creative & different. I think its very good put together & really dosen´t need to be explained because of it´s abstract from. Nice job!

Jul. 06 '08

entz said:

Thanks guys! :) i really appreciate your feedbacks.

Prismatic - I'm not sure what language is that, but i sure would like a translation in english :) thanks!

Sep. 12 '08

Mishka said:

for me great

Sep. 19 '08

entz said:

Glad you like it Mishka.

Please login/register to make a comment, registration is easy, signup