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Naturascapes

by tiddleiwinks • Uploaded: Jun. 24 '08
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Description: Identity design for an organization promoting natural and organic gardening and landscaping. Created for my senior project.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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gthobbs said on Jun. 25 '08

Very nice. But those breaks in the "a" and "p" really hurt legibility. And the tag line is too small in relative scale.
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nettogirl said on Jun. 30 '08

I really like your image. The font for naturascapes is kinda cool, but when I first glanced at it I read it as "naturcisccipes". Also, the spacing in the tagline looks a little off to me... wide gaps, and then it doesn't allign center with the image above.... it hangs off the right a bit. Love the image on the top. Think that part is great and would translate well to b&w :)
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saawan said on Jun. 30 '08

I love the mark but not a fan of the type used.

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