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Fenix

by liquor • Uploaded: Jun. 23 '08
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Description: Fenix

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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paulinhosantana said on Jun. 25 '08

very good!

cobaltcow said on Jun. 25 '08

mate - this is a hot mark! Great type and execution.

just a few personal thoughts though.

1. at first i thought it was a ferret with wings. maybe make more of a dip at the back of the neck? I think phoenix's usually have more of a defined head.

2. The gap between the X and the tail seems slightly too big for me.

3. The tail section to the right of the X could be a little more rounded. it seems a little to square and doesnt flow naturally around.

liquor said on Jun. 26 '08

@cobatcow.: Thanks for comment mate. They r very useful..i will think about it

Sailendra said on Jun. 26 '08

Very nice, liquor.

sisudesigns said on Jun. 26 '08

I like the type, the birds feathers could be simplified but its a wonderful mark.

AlexWende said on Jun. 30 '08

I agree with sisudesigns about the feathers, it was my first thought too. The type and the mark are very well balanced, looking very nice!

ali.tasnimi said on Jul. 06 '08

nice without dot

shiimera said on Jul. 09 '08

I love it and I agree with cobatcow comment.

Type08 said on Jul. 24 '08

Logo is great! Personally, I would make it with other typography...

lifesaverservant said on Aug. 25 '08

Love it. Ver refreshing use of type and mark. Thanks for the break from ordinary. FO SHO!!!

kappa said on Aug. 26 '08

Love this palate. Great mark

orjan said on Aug. 26 '08

ooo...this is good. Enjoying it!

Rezik said on Nov. 02 '08

Like it, how can I contact you ?

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