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- FunBox
- by dado
- Logo for a videogame room. Fun Box is a club that offers the rent of videogames at the local, for a determinate time.
- Number of views: 2153
- Dated Submitted: Jun. 23 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jul. 07 '08
- As seen on: damiand.com
Jun. 23 '08
dache said:Very nice. I would personally enjoy having the extremties of the four colored shapes have rounded edges to make it more uniform; an equal line thickness that divides the shapes as that of the eyes and mouth; also this distance can be used to reposition the eyes a little less towards the center. It may also be more dynamic with less a less jagged central white line.
Jun. 23 '08
nefiflorian said:Como antes, excelente trabajo hermano! Sin lugar a dudas una composición estupenda.
Jun. 23 '08
OcularInk said:I think it looked better with a thicker stroke between the shapes and a thicker stroke on the smile. Other than that, yes. :-)
Jun. 24 '08
Thomas said:Nicely done my friend!
Jul. 07 '08
mr2creative said:Excellent use of color and shape but yes the eyes make it look a little sinister. Have you tried a wink, could add even more fun.
Jul. 08 '08
hellouriah said:A wink would be creepy! Nice colours, thought about swapping the colors, dark at the back and brighter at the front so you get a more open box. Reminds me of the finder logo on the mac.
Jul. 13 '08
huyendesigner said:that's funny !
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Jun. 23 '08
OcularInk said:Nice solution. It's very fun! The eyes kind of bug me though ( just a little bit ). Have you tried solid circles for the eyes and then match the perspective of each side of the face/box? You may not even need to match the perspective. Even so, nice job.