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TY CAMERA
by omixam
An offer for Ty Woods Photography. The client looks for an icon that plays with the letters TY
Number of views: 1783
Dated Submitted: Jun. 20 '08
Added to Gallery: Jun. 27 '08

Jun. 20 '08

james said:

hi. while i like the mark, the TY is not very clear.

Jun. 21 '08

omixam said:

Thanks James. You think the problem is the colour o the forms?

Jun. 21 '08

james said:

yeah i think so. could you remove the light grey sections altogether and just suggest the camera with negative space created by the initials? if not just experiment with colour schemes, also id elongate the tail of the y so its the same width as the tail of the t.

Jun. 21 '08

omixam said:

thanks james i'll try the changes

Jun. 21 '08

ClimaxDesigns said:

nice changes i would assume from the conversation, why is the bottom photography instead of camera, is the name of the company ty camera ot ty photography?

Jun. 23 '08

omixam said:

@ Climax Designs: the name is ty photograpy
@ nima thanks

Jun. 28 '08

danno74 said:

While I think the idea is clever, I would personally have 'TY Photography' in full text underneath the mark. Perhaps a faux 3D treatment on the camera would be cool, with the 'T' and 'Y' being a complimentary colour to the rest of the mark?

Jun. 29 '08

omixam said:

yes danno74, it´s a good idea. Probably try it. Thanks for comment

Jun. 29 '08

TECHNEO said:

i would bring some more space between teh mark and the word...

Jul. 02 '08

davebrenner said:

Very original for such a simple shape. I don't see the TY but I like it as a symbol anyway. Nice design.

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