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- Core Cider
- by b3nder
- Core Cider, Perth Western Australia. Chosen design, packaging currently in development. Studio: Braincells
- Number of views: 4632
- Dated Submitted: Jun. 19 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jun. 20 '08
Jun. 20 '08
OcularInk said:Very nice, b3nder. This is different enough from the logo dache referenced. Nice work.
Jun. 20 '08
mentelibre1 said:esta idea esta mucho mejor, mas clara y tienen mas impacto visual, felicidades!
Jun. 22 '08
koodoz said:Really cool, but I agree with firebrand and colour looking a little 'pearish'
Jun. 22 '08
sarah_chinn said:I like it, but I think the color could be a little different. It looks like a simple pear to me. And I think it just looks a little too much. I think you can make it a little more simple.
Jun. 22 '08
leighton_hubbell said:Great concept. I don't think it's too complex or overworked at all. Perhaps the color needs some adjustment. Nice job.
Jun. 24 '08
itsgareth said:I think the green worked better, a darker, richer green rather than the "pear-like" green shown before.-
Jun. 24 '08
artboy said:I really like the new colour, makes it more apple-y than pear-y. Technical terms, I know...
Jun. 24 '08
mdavis682 said:I really like these colors. I think they are spot on and make it feel much more "apple." You can almost taste it by just looking at the mark
Jun. 24 '08
smartinup said:what type of apples does this company use to create their cider? Many cider companies pride themselves on there choice of blends. So maybe its as simple as using colors that match their chosen apples.
Jun. 26 '08
koodoz said:I prefer the red, but it seems a little washed out still. It would be amazing if you could simulate the reddy-green colours of an apple as a vector based texture. Although, that would probably cause all kinds of printing grievances ...
Jun. 26 '08
clashmore said:This is great. One little thing that's bugging me, though, is the lip at the top of the bottle. I'd either get rid of it or make it more noticeable.
Jun. 27 '08
sailendra said:What I'm loving about this site is the wide diversity of styles and divergent opinions. Love the concept and execution, Brett. Didn't like the red, but I still prefer your original green (despite the pearish connotation). It was more evocative of the crisp, fresh taste you'd expect from a cider - just goes to show you can't please everyone!
An old Buddhist master once said, "First thought, best thought" : )
Jul. 02 '08
davebrenner said:I see pear at first glance as well but the word Cider brings me back to earth. Nice execution and design.
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Jun. 20 '08
firebrand said:Great mark and execution. Maybe the colour makes it a little 'pear' like.