• I am actively looking for critiques
OrigamiClothing
by joker66
Its a Logo for my new online clothing shop. I hope u like the concept. I am actively looking for critiques, so plz post what u think about it! Very thx!
Number of views: 3320
Dated Submitted: Jun. 15 '08
Added to Gallery: Jun. 15 '08

Jun. 15 '08

.phoenix said:

I think the collar could be better... looks strange right now. But I love the concept. :)


Jun. 15 '08

Kwaku said:

luv it <3


Jun. 15 '08

OcularInk said:

Very clever. I think there is a way to execute the mark without using gradients/drop shadows. It might be worth exploring. Even so, great concept and logo.


Jun. 15 '08

james said:

nice. have you tried using folds for the collar?


Jun. 15 '08

joker66 said:

Very thx. I used folds in a earlier version but i think that this would be to much details. I want to hold the mark very clean because i still working on a version without gradients and shodows, but still i dont find the truth..


Jun. 15 '08

gthobbs said:

Love this. The C in clothing is visually hanging a tad to the left.


Jun. 15 '08

dikkers said:

Very, very nice.

Have you see the video that's floating on the net of a Japaneses lady folding a t-shirt up perfectly in 2 motions? Reminded me of that.


Jun. 16 '08

Tanoshism said:

The logo mark makes me thing of a straight jacket for some reason. But the concept is nice, the colours too.


Jun. 16 '08

chovy said:

great - perhaps a dress-collar.


Jun. 17 '08

Blue Clover said:

very nice idea and execution.


Jun. 17 '08

cerise said:

Awesome, perhaps a little double fold opening up to form an arm. Then the collar wouldn't be an issue.


Jun. 17 '08

MAN-DESIGN.net said:

have u tried kind of straigh cuts collar so that this be more Origami...


Jun. 18 '08

ROCKKIT 26 said:

Very cool. Could be interesting to have the shirt fold into other objects other than a square ie some kind of animal or piece of lettering as well as adding some stitching lines to the finish. Well done.


Jun. 18 '08

OcularInk said:

The stitching lines could be a nice touch. Hmm...


Jun. 25 '08

liquor said:

I love Myriad Pro. Good work!


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