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- Flook - Fishing Club
- by bifoz
- Flook
- Number of views: 4356
- Dated Submitted: Jun. 08 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jun. 09 '08
Jun. 09 '08
sdijock said:Nice overall. But you're really pushing it with the "F" - not sure if that's working too well.
Jun. 09 '08
fogra said:Flookin' brilliant!
Jun. 09 '08
rfrusso said:I agree with sdijock that the F might be a stretch ... but at first glance I didn't even see the name in there. I think it works nicely as is, even if it didn't spell anything. Once you see the word, that's a nice bonus!
Jun. 10 '08
artboy said:I agree with rfrusso, definitely works without needing to know the name is in there and it's a nice surprise when it appears!
Jun. 10 '08
OpenHead said:Nice job!
Maybe if the 'mouth' was the same weight as the other letters (like the L) the F would work better? And what if the vertical line next to the F was separated slightly so again the F worked harder.
Jun. 10 '08
Impriano said:Great job the F works great, fits with the rest of the text in the fish and i dont think it is pushing it at all...Clearly an F. I love this piece
Jun. 11 '08
mr2creative said:The best part about this logo is 1. the fish and 2. the overall balance. Nice job.
Jun. 12 '08
b3nder said:I think that the F would be clearer without the vertical section on the right tip of the letter. There is already a line there from the L so it is a double up anyway. With this piece removed the F would be far clearer and the word would have more flow to it. Brilliant. I love it!
Jun. 12 '08
nightslayer said:love it !!! so amazing
Jun. 22 '08
Sailendra said:Good logo. I like the fact it can be used as a stand alone without the text.
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Jun. 09 '08
Muamer said:This flook really nice :D