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Trojan Security v4
by james
v4. I've used the bold version of the typeface to give it more strength, and increased the size.
Number of views: 1958
Dated Submitted: Jun. 06 '08
Added to Gallery: Jun. 06 '08

Jun. 06 '08

kriecheque said:

Really nice work! This is really nit-picky, but I think "trojan" could be just a little bit big/wider. I'm picturing the word "trojan" as the shoulders to the figure that might wear the helmet and I think the shoulders would naturally be just a little wider. Aside from that, this is really amazing

Jun. 06 '08

fliph said:

Great idea. It actually took me a sec to figure out that it was a helmet. I thought at first it was a T underneath a glass cover (like they do with cakes in diners). Nice work.

Jun. 07 '08

james said:

Good comments. I think going bold has made a difference, the 1st few versions lacked the weight it needed, i take your point about making the text a bit bigger, i like how you described it as being his shoulders.

fliph.....i stared...and i stared.......and now i get it what you mean :)

cheers

Jun. 10 '08

Impriano said:

genius! I do agree with the first guy, it would be cool to have the text a little wider to represent his shoulders but thats picky like he said. This is great man

Jun. 10 '08

gthobbs said:

I still can't help but see a reservoir tip that failed, hence the burst out the top. I know. I know. But it says TROJAN for Pete's sake!

Jun. 10 '08

clashmore said:

Hahahahaha

Jun. 11 '08

OcularInk said:

Hmmm...that's funny.

Jun. 11 '08

smartinup said:

at gthobbs, thats what i have been thinking ever since this logo has been..... uploaded.

Jun. 11 '08

Lucidity said:

Maybe its a Trojan cake? Like one of those tubes of chips that actually have snakes in it? Like, when you take off the glass lid, it'll attack you.

I dunno, I saw it after it was mentioned, but definitely saw the helmet first. Good job.

Jun. 11 '08

emesghali said:

absolutely amazing. one of my favorites on the site so far.

its really cewl how the opening makes a t.

the only thing i would change in the colors, i would go with more earthy, rugged ones.

like maybe off-white text and a more copper looking helmit, the burgandy is classic, no need to touch that.

beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

Jun. 17 '08

errede said:

I love it, it's a great work. I think the feathers should be a bit shorter

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