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Dobson Images
by Lawrence Anderson
The goal here was to come up with a distinct and classic mark that could easily stand alone on promotional materials and be used as a seal of sorts on images. The brighter orange part is a floral design made of "Ds".
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Dated Submitted: May. 26 '08
As seen on: www.designedbyanderson.com

May. 26 '08

clashmore said:

The tag-line may be centered, but you need to fix it so it looks centered.

May. 26 '08

Lawrence Anderson said:

Do you mean horizontally or vertically? I think the period through it off on the h axis.

May. 26 '08

clashmore said:

Horizontally. Yep, the period is throwing it off, as are the serifs on the D.

May. 26 '08

Lawrence Anderson said:

Any better?

May. 26 '08

clashmore said:

Better on the left side, but I'd play around with aligning the P with the stem of the D, ignoring the serifs. It might look weird, but it's worth a try.

May. 26 '08

clashmore said:

*Better on the right side.

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