-
I am actively looking for critiques
- PeakConnection
- by brodaigh
- My first upload. Represents a peak. Duh! The connection is the foundation.
- Number of views: 158
- Dated Submitted: May. 18 '08
May. 20 '08
brodaigh said:Hi OcularInk! I'm over the moon(theres an image) to get some constructive criticism. Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou! I must have been blind to miss that uneven spacing. I will spend some more time on this. Thankyou :)
Please login/register to make a comment, registration is easy, signup
May. 19 '08
OcularInk said:This has lots of potential. I'd try reworking your kerning on the word 'PEAK' and tighten up the 'connection' text below. In fact, you can tighten up that text and reduce the size to fit nicely underneath 'PEAK'. Also, is there a better way to also convey the 'connection' part more? Overall, though, I think this works.