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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Scaffold Marlborough
- by BigAl67
- Identity created for firm that specialises in the hire of scaffolding for construction sites.
- Number of views: 195
- Dated Submitted: May. 15 '08
May. 19 '08
sdijock said:I agree with gthobbs. It's got a great Charles S. Anderson retro feel to it but I'm not digging the guy. I can see that you're attempting to make an "S" out of him but you're trying WAY too hard to make it work. I would either make a cool stylized "S" or a cool stylized guy, not both. Also, the placement of "Reach for the sky" feels very random and makes it feel like an afterthought.
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May. 16 '08
gthobbs said:Love the look and style. I can't for the life of me though figure out what's going on with that icon. I see the guy but have no idea what's happening with the lower half of him. The tagline really feels out of place too. Nice design.