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I am actively looking for critiques
- Parmel
- by janzabransky
- Logo for business software company + IT. Handmade typography.
- Number of views: 715
- Dated Submitted: May. 14 '08
May. 15 '08
dkone said:zaujimava typogafia ... paci sa mi to, len tiez mozno trochu to P... neviem, mozno male p, :) je to ale velmi dobre, good work
May. 15 '08
koodoz said:It's nice as a thumbnail, but on closer inspection the type is a bit rough. For me, the 'a' is the worst offender. I also assumed on first glance that it was for a pharmaceutical company.
May. 15 '08
janzabransky said:I tried so many graphic variations on each letter that I must to say I cant execute it better. Anyway thanks a lot for critics guys. I think about it and next time try to apply it to some new logo. I am learning a lot here on logopond.
dkone: ahoj, rád tady vidím "skoro" krajana, díky za komentá%u0159.
May. 15 '08
fogra said:I quite like the style of the typography however the 'e' should be the same as the 'a' but rotated.
May. 15 '08
janzabransky said:fogra: I really understand what you mean with swaping "a" and "e" but this doesnt work in my eyes. It looks than incomplete ... maybe more dynamic but in my opinion whole sign lost stability. But appreciate your approach. Thanks
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May. 14 '08
logotivity said:I know how hard it is to create typography, but I don't see anything special about this font that seperates it from one that may look similar..
the P looks like it's dragging on the inside left, gives it a squared off feel, try to curve it a bit more..