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Subparel

by ChrisErickson • Uploaded: Sep. 11 '06
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Description: Subparel is an online mag about rad footwear and apparel.

As seen on: www.subparel.com

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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project_underwear said on Sep. 11 '06

This is snazzy. I\'m not sure you need to inset the diagonal lines at such an angle. I believe that the shape in teh middle would look great with no inset (without the white border on the top and right side). Or apply the white stroke fruggaly to the outside of the lines. I really dig it though. kudos.

pritchett.nick said on Sep. 12 '06

great great work man. that is really awesome.

shockmanifesto said on Sep. 19 '06

love the lines.
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KGB said on Sep. 21 '06

looks good. One thing to consider: The S in most fonts has a smaller/tighter circumference on the top half. See how your S looks like it\'s tilting to the left a bit?
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grubedoo said on Sep. 26 '06

I agree with KGB. Beside that minor tweak, this is a gorgeous mark.

ChrisErickson said on Sep. 27 '06

Thanks for the feedback, I\'ll implement.

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