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I am actively looking for critiques
- One leaf II
- by choerte
- A two color version of the logo.
- Number of views: 3094
- Dated Submitted: May. 10 '08
- Added to Gallery: May. 12 '08
May. 10 '08
hellouriah said:The leaf looks a little forced, maybe more of a branch coming out of the top.
May. 11 '08
bai said:After concentrating on negative space, I think it is a curling leaf. Is it?
May. 11 '08
choerte said:Yes, bai, it's supposed to be a curling leaf. Didn't want it to be too realistic, but I will try and see what it looks like if I make it more like a real leaf. Thanks, everyone.
May. 13 '08
cfig said:This is nice. I'd like to see the "1" a bit more stylized, but I like the concept a lot. You might work with the type a bit more as well, I think it could be refined some more.
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May. 10 '08
Lawrence Anderson said:Good concept, but I think the leaf could look more natural.