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I am actively looking for critiques
- One leaf
- by choerte
- Concept for a landscape design studio.
- Number of views: 670
- Dated Submitted: May. 08 '08
May. 08 '08
choerte said:Thanks, kellyoneill. I was thinking the same about the background color when I saw it uploaded. Changed it to a bit darker now.
May. 08 '08
kriecheque said:i agree, the one could stand to be a bit bolder...and the leaf part could be more prominent
May. 08 '08
choerte said:Thanks for your suggestions kellyoneill and kriecheque. Updated... worked a bit on the leaf part and the boldness of the one.
May. 08 '08
ClimaxDesigns said:you could actually make this two colors make the 'base' of the tree brown and make one branch come off with one leaf on it in the same style but would hammer home the leaf and the one.
May. 09 '08
kellyoneill said:This looks so much better! Great :) I agree with gthobbs about the tallness - I didn't notice it before, but perhaps a shorter "1" would bring this logo home.
May. 10 '08
choerte said:OK, thanks everyone for your valuable comments. Made a final update with the mark not being so tall (at first I wanted it to be tall, because ot the tree resemblence, but I think it work's better now).
ClimaxDesigns, I thought about your suggestion and will upload the two color version, but I want to keep this scheme as well, I kinda like the combination.
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May. 08 '08
kellyoneill said:It's a nice concept.. It doesn't completely "pop" for me - maybe use a thicker 1 or a darker background?