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I am actively looking for critiques
- Aged Gourmet Cheeses
- by kellyoneill
- 2nd comp for this design, based on suggestions by fellow designers to remove the plate the cheese was on. I welcome your comments and critiques.
- Number of views: 323
- Dated Submitted: May. 07 '08
- As seen on: www.theartistoflife.com
May. 07 '08
Relevant said:It makes me want cheese, so I'd say its successful! :) This one is really nice, much better without the plate.
May. 08 '08
smartinup said:nice one! much stronger now.
May. 08 '08
kriecheque said:yeah, this version is stronger. I think the 'gourment cheese' could be a bit bigger...if the logo was scaled down, the bottom type might be too hard to read.
May. 30 '08
jjjost said:Very nice work! BTW, I took a look at your website. Very nice work! And I was blessed by your openness with your faith! God bless!
May. 31 '08
kellyoneill said:Wow - thanks jjjost. I appreciate you taking the time to look at my site! :)
Sep. 10 '08
azacarias7 said:wow very cheesy...lol I mean it looks real nice. I like your work:)
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May. 07 '08
sandhya said:this is way better! maybe if you scale just the "aged" some and leave a little breathing space of white around it, you are all set :)